Here are my comments - let me know if you have any questions or need help!
The home page looks really nice! As you already know, make sure to have some explanatory text here. Give a good welcome message to the visitor and an explanation of the content they'll find on the site.The Landmarks page might look better with some text at the top to explain the images. Or maybe consider a gallery instead of a number of individual images.On the Images page, I think it's confusing where at the top you tell people to "Click here on the pages below to view more" but it's not really a link, it's just an explanation. I think maybe you can delete this sentence.- Add some text to the top the page Local Wedding. And as I'm sure you know, it'd be good to add a lot more images to this page! :)
- The Bible Dedication page has no real content, so I'd unpublish it for now.
The Parables of Jesus page needs text on the left.On the Gospel Films page, I feel like it's not very satisfying to see The Story of Jesus for Children and Magdalena crammed into such a tiny space. I would like to see them at least on a two-column block, if not on their own pages!Same with the Gospel Music page. It would be nice to see such nice media take up a bit more space on the site. All that empty space makes the media look lonely. Also, why do you link to the YouTube video instead of playing the YouTube video from within your Wildfire site?On the Audios page (I think it should be "Audio" anyway), a little text to explain the player would be nice.The Text/PDFs page definitely needs some explanatory text. I'm also not sure if it's a good idea to put a full PDF file in a 2-column block. Is the top right PDF supposed to be in Landscape mode? It doesn't all fit in the screen.On the Limbum–English Dictionary PDF page, please please PLEASE let that PDF out of its cage! If you have one PDF on a page, NO QUESTION - one column only! :)Please fill out the Copyright page (here) - at least the sponsor name.- Some general reminders about Limbum, once you have someone to translate all the text. You must:
- Translate every page title and all page text into Limbum
- Translate all media names into Limbum. Go here, and then click the drop-down arrow on the far right, and click on Translate. Do this for every piece of media on your site!
- Complete the translation of "Public website - essential" phrases (here and here) at the very least (and as many optional ones as you can) and the phrases for the Jesus Film (here).
- That's about it. It's a great-looking site and I look forward to seeing it live on the internet! Great job!